Black Poetry : part V

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Aug 16, 2004.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    freedom part V

    fredom
    wat is it...
    wat does it occupy?
    my mind?
    is my mind free to think...
    yeah... yes it is
    but...
    only with wat others feed me
    plant in me
    does it seem to grow
    wat a conspiracy...
    so esssentially.. r my thots free?
    if the media
    and the news
    constantly try to influence me
    all these diferent companies
    channels....
    but aint none of them depicting tru reality
    our my thots pure...
    if they intrude my system like a a computer virus
    taking over my main frame
    till i can unhack their secrets
    to suceeding
    their secrets of unrest....
    they words aint nothing but made for books
    for shows
    for jokes
    to please rates
    gain money
    they aint for knowldge
    or truth
    so r my thots pure....
    if the false stuff does nothing but intrude...
    if all i hear
    read
    and
    see is bull-ish, lies, false promises....
    false hopes....
    wheres the truth...
    r we free....
    yet?
    NOW?​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice series of flowz
    freedom speaks
     
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    i am enjoying the freedom series
    keep on flowing...
     
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    We grow and thrive depending upon how we are nourished....You know, I haven't gotten enough of this yet, you convey some potent points.
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these are all excellent questions...hmmm...
    very good questions indeed...
     
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    daroc,
    enjoying your questioning and flow....."by the soul and the order and proportion given to it and the teaching of it as to what is wrong and right for it.....surely those prosper who spend with purity on it and those lose who neglect it....."

    Surely there are the ongoing attempts to control the free and the free struggle on to remain free and reach new heights of freedom.....

    Peace be unto you....
     
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    word up. this is on point.
     
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