Black Poetry : Part Two How can I love you........

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How can I love you when your spoken for
    How can I love you and she's about to give your more

    I prayed for a brother like you
    And I asked my heavenly Father to help me to discern the truth

    But the truth is how could I ever be near you
    And not want to fulfill the things that I want to do

    How can I say I'm the one
    How can I say my love for you weighs a ton

    How can I want you when you will never see me
    And in the back of mind I have to let it be

    How can I resist not to touch your lips
    How can I not replay over in my mind the clip

    When it is I who should be your wife
    How can I say I want to be a part of your life

    How can I ask a man grounded in God to look past the mess
    How can I enen imagine putting you to test

    How can I just pretend
    Why shouldI just settle for being a friend

    If you were mine I would ask Mother Earth to stand still for a moment
    Because I want her to reveal to you the true woman

    How can I tell ya my heart begs for you
    How can I even know if what I feel is true

    Dont let it be a concidence or a chance
    How can I show you true romance
    How can I show you I want to enhance
    How much I yearn for you to be my man
    How I long for you to hold my hand

    And give me the commitment I deserve
    Love like yours I would preserve

    For now until the end of time
    How can I selfishily ask you to continue this rhyme
    Seeing you would never give me the time

    But I cant help to wonder on

    How can I love you...............


    this is the continuation of Man of God. Part three will follow three will determine if my feelings will win or not. Will I get the man or not this piece is inspired by one of the members here can anybody guess who.
    :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how can i .......this was smooth and tyte
    let me see if i can guess could it be ...naw !
    thinking !
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the support rich always.:kiss:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Life would be so much simpler if we could truly know before going through all the changes that maybe takes us through. But, such is life. Awaiting part three, do flow on.
     
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    humm let me guess...nope can't figure...very nice read
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you blkthunder for the love shown to me.
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    LOL.....OK...MY GUESS IT THAT IT'S RICH....lol

    BUT IT'S A TIGHT PIECE...I LOVE HOW THE RHYME FLOWS....WHO EVER HE IS, HE IS A LUCKY MAN TO HAVE A WOMAN POST ONLINE BEAUTY SUCH AS THIS....

    I DO THINK IT'S RICH THO....i seen yall,,,little love taps and such...LOL
     
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