Black Poetry : Part of My Mind

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Part of My Mind

    Devastate a cutie with kisses that create beauty girl
    Got a great booty, I wear different bling in a cutie’s world
    This is a significant thing on duty, so I’m alert in the park
    To this work of art like Captain Kurt I spark phasers when dark
    Carry razors, like a ship my script on deck and distinguish learned
    Correct English but who I’m going to speak it to and then earn
    A living doing it? started rapping looking for a craft that’s nice
    Half my life ruined by mom and dad, alarmed and mad oh Christ
    The other half was by deadbeat kids now my head freak on lids
    Of crack, drinking make fools of folks I school with quotes slid
    And told cool jokes use tools and tote moon pies for lunch dun
    Look my personality hit a curve had a deft wreck definitely stunned
    In order to preserve my self-respect had to lie and cheat to try and defeat
    Reality I still lost out a grave cost no doubt, need new plan for streets
    Like Hollywood I mistake folks for stars while drinking coke at bars
    Hope Mars be the romantic planet of my destiny love exotic cars
    Wear wild things corrupt but to foul things up requires a computer
    Desires a tutor to teach me the keyboard then rap nice like Luda
    look some folks have to drink to have fun so I grab one beer
    now face tons of fear didn’t know a cold bud could steer
    slap a bold thug like me starting to see green moons and little
    stars
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwww green moons and little stars I tell ya dat's what a bud can do !
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow what an intriguing part of your mind. nice flow bro.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow fo real
     
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