Black Poetry : Part of me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jul 15, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Part of me is he
    So true in the past
    I knew him
    God behold
    Part of me is he
    His poetry
    His love song
    Anew and fresh
    Brings me alive
    When I was died
    As I understand him
    He is just like me
    He is my truth
    Learning as we grow
    ..........together
    For nothing comes so real
    As he makes me feel…..
    ………….He makes me feel
    With him the sky opens up to my wishes
    ………..My wishes
    And sends me to heaven on a star
    …………On a star
    Part of me is he
    …………Part of me is he
    As my heart cries and rejoice in he
    For I found a place I can breath
    I love him
    In everyway
    ………..A woman can love a man
    Part of me is he
    …………Part of me is he
    He is my truth
    ………My truth
    The echoes of his love
    Surrounds me
    .........Surrounds me
    He is my blessing......




    (C) 2004
    JBG Production
    with a
    Touch of A blkangel thang
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a sweet flow:)
    I enjoyed reading it
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is such a touching scribe that flowed to the page.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoa Angel.
    what ya trying to do here
    had my head all into this one
    u trying to cross my vision whewwwwwww!!
    love this piece here keep scribing sistah
     
  5. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Rich...you're too funny, bruh...dapz.

    Tell it like it is.

    :thanks: for sharing.

    :toast:
     
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    :toast: :toast: This is beautiful Angel.
     
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    Very beautiful
    song of the heart!

    Capture its essence
    and keep releasing!

    Tyte Drop!
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the
    loving support
    Peace
    Angel
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's deep, very deep when one feels that another is 'a part of them. That's like "two hearts beating as one, and that's a beautiful love...when shared by two...I felt this piece to the core. thanks for taking us there.
     
  10. angelicsage

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    wow...sister this was beautiful...
    to feel that level of oneness with
    another person is truly a blessing
    loved it!
     
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