Black Poetry : Paralyzed - http://blog.myspace.com/dyslexicandwhat

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  1. waynethomas

    waynethomas Active Member MEMBER

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    Paralyzed
    By W. Thomas


    Her eyes have captured me,
    To complete this poem I could say nothing in addition,
    But like this poem their not finished with me,
    Once I am in view of your vision I am in your total submission,
    So I am here for you to have your way with me,
    Our distance away is a mere heart beats in motion,
    However the mind controlling my body is no longer me,
    Our slow measured blinking transaction has caused me to vision,
    A time that you will close your eyes on me,
    As you're my baby I want to preserve this feeling you have caused me relaxation,
    Rest your eyes, show me your dimples and smile for me.


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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eyes have a way of expressing things that words can't. Loved your word play, very endearing quality. Welcome to Destees!
     
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    Through da eyes say so much what da lips may not part to do
    tyte joint kinda reminds me of a piece i did about them eyez dat speakz
     
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