Black Poetry : Paradyse Found

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...paradyse found.
     
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    Beautiful Sunshyne

    reading this at night
    as i walk out "yall's room"
    into the bright sunshyne

    where are my shades!

    :)

    Destee
     
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    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for this

    it's a place I often wish I never left...

    and thank you for the welcome, Ms. Newby :)

    S
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you guys!!... thanks for the read...

    destee... sis you are my constant!!
    your support... PRICELESS...
    NothinButLove~

    saleem... is it too late for your to
    go back to Paradyse?? & why'd you leave
    in the 1st place??
    Peace&Love~
     
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    In the still of the night
    I hear you calling
    beckoning....


    Yet if I leave the Lighthouse who shall watch over the Sea called Love????
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bishop...

    then if you hear my call...
    why aren't you answering me?

    & if you don't leave the lighthouse...
    who are you gonna find to watch over You!
    (i think the sea of love can take care
    of itself... for a little while at least)
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey You Guys.....

    this is the piece that inspired Reason...
    hope you all like it. :)
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    how could you not love THIS?????

    FIYAH!!!!!


    she blesses my nyght 1nce again.

    thanx.

    sean.
     
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    Sunshyne

    Simply Beautiful,
    Your ability to put this into words impresses me beyond
    belief. You are one of my many inspirations.
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    simply beautiful, even the 2nd time around. but, sweet sunshyne, you already know that. ryght? ryght. smiles to you, dear friend. yes, to the love poetry!
     
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