Black Poetry : Paradise

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    [I saw paradise the other day
    Aww the scenery was beautiful
    Like some part of earth
    That had been preserved
    And protected from the
    Destructive hands of man

    It had the deepest calmest waters
    And the most beautiful shores
    And the place that accomidated me
    Had he most beautiful brown doors

    I watched the tourists go by and
    They all waved and said their hellos
    and goodbyes
    I knew this was the place for settle down
    And stretch out and finally be free

    For this paradise so perfect was ME
    Those shores my curves each unique and brown
    Those doors my eyes beautiful and bright
    The tourists the people who pass daily through my life
    And those waters my soul in its purest form

    My paradise is me the most beautiful untarnished thing in this world.
     
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    how divine and sweet the unique of
    beauty within self , through them eyes
    say it all this was beautifully pose'd
     
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    I live for the moment in my paradise
     
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    In the end we all seek to be in pardise. Very nicely done poet.
     
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    Thank you my only hope is that the words I've said will put a new concept of paradise in someones head about what your paradise should be.
     
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