Black Poetry : Pappa's Play Toy

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Greens and cream,
    sparse decoration bulbs
    from the psychiatrists office.
    Mis-hung mental posters
    slant to the left, unsteady
    escaping parental authority.

    Sixteen years old,
    used up, burnt out, worn
    her precious gift--gone.
    Stolen. Relatively speaking.

    Afraid of the dark,
    allergic to contact.
    Touches burn, sizzle
    making skin useless.

    Darkened doorway
    sweat pores perspiration;
    Arrhythmia steals the atmosphere
    until the weight slips and eases.
    Nightmare shadows retreat, disappear
    leaving confusion, raw thighs.

    Nickel-plated fingerprints;
    squeeze, breathe, pull.
    A father misguided, misuser
    sibling savior sacrifices all
    punctures dark shadows finish.


    Come readmy new column on INCEST in the Ask the Columnist Forum--Ra
     
  2. Bishop

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    Amun, boy you know how to flow like no other......enjoyed this...On my way to check your column.
     
  3. nubianlover

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    yes sir indeed walking behind Bishop!
     
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    wow Amun-Ra
    you're deep Bruh Man
    i've read the article
    yeah ... you shole dun said it
    here and there!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Do It Fella!!!

    As only Ra can!!!

    Respect
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  6. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A sore spot!

    This one has been brewing and stewing a long time. I heard just one story too many. This is not the end of it. I don't know what I'll do, but this is one that needs to be fixed--Ra
     
  7. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Spurred Myself!

    I just don't want to hear another sad story. I went out on the net this morning looking for place that needed help with this type of thing. I found several in my area and i am going to get on board to do something if its nothing else than to lend some support. This is ridiculous. It should never happen.

    Ra
     
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    Ra....

    this piece was deeply felt...
    & in your usual dynamic style
    you have made me think....

    thanks for sharing... &
    for increasing awareness.

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Picking

    I always get something stuck in my throat in the middle of the week and get indignant about it--I wish I could do more--Amun=Ra
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome sweet classic ..................
     
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