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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Apr 1, 2008.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She glide in a beautiful glair
    twisted and mend fair
    like winds rollin through da hill
    made for me and bring me thrill

    Her hair was silky black
    her skin silvery dark against da moonlight
    soft caressin mumble tone
    rapture within itself alone

    A face of grace and tender hope
    as she arrive wit a bold float
    i still hear da cries of her whistle
    feel da path to her sizzle

    Handz made her to my morrow
    molded painted to a chocolate flower
    given life by da mental mind
    one to love live and dine

    PaperDoll :em4700:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I felt such an ease to this delicate write. I really enjoyed the creativity of your quill here.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz sista Watz for the continue love shown , it was something i was thinking
    when i made a paperdoll