Black Poetry : PAPER PUSHER

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Your love shaded me when the sun was too bright
    you covered me like an umbrella when the rain poured at night
    you held my hand sweetly and tight
    gave my love a reason to fight
    when we crossed the street it was fate on sight

    You'd laugh at my habits and our love was discreet
    you were the words of my flow
    that played with my pad for an uncore
    you were the thoughts that got me to care
    like an open beat my heart now bare

    You were the truth when I couldnt tame lies
    for in your my love was mesmerized
    you were the lips that told me to try
    that secret kiss brought tears to my eyez
    you were the love that stole all my fears
    you were the hand that wiped away these tears

    Something had happened my silence broke free
    my fairytale ended and your note was abound
    da stain on my page was drops of cares, yet
    the roads they are silent walking unknown
    no umbrella in hand and so very alone
    got me now singing this here song!

    When i crossover you never stopped
    to add to my just arriving in colored ink
    careless words muttered slow things a blur
    with no control you just stared
    but now you gone plain black n' white

    Like a note written , don't leave me now
    we have a poem to finish a story to tell
    a book to uncover and love to share
    i know not of you but what has been reveil
    what i do know is my needs baby come back.


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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In order to avoid conflict love don't love nobody; and so it is...

    Might I take this opportunity to say that I love this poetry of yours
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz bruh for the love and visit to my work. I too am a humble fan of yours !
     
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    Aww, sookie-sookie, now! Sounds like you got your Lenny Williams, Keith Sweat and Temptations BEGGING vibe on! lol I like a man who knows how to beg! :lol:

    Just kidding witcha! Seriously, this piece is somber yet beautiful in its earnestness, sincerity of heart and honest purity.

    Well done!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Cherryblossom.....U know i had to get my keith , Lenny Temp on cause
    (I ain't to proud to beg!) Thankz a million sis for the love and visit within my vibe
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Not understanding the reasons why, hurts all the more, some relationships you just can't pinpoint exactly why things went sour, just that, they did. Such an emotively posed piece poet.
     
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    yes sis we do get lost in the wonderment of not knowing what and why just that it happen whewwwww!
    thankz sis for seeing inside this one .
     
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    Shaking my head




    I have been like a fien reading your poems! I be poking my bottom lip out when I am finish! Maybe I am being selfish but right now I am taking delight in the Love and meloncaly...lolol... I know I spelled it wrong ...anywhew the point is I was trying to read without responding and I could not..LOL!!!

    :hi:
     
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    see Jazzytude now u making me try to come up with a way to make you respond quickly
    let me seee.....ahhh! i got .....my next piece will be da love of you , how can you not respond ...lol
    Thank you sister for reading me often and i am very humble your words mean so much to me ....
     
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    paper pusher / love dat return for another look !
     
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