Black Poetry : Paper Playing In The Park

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Rashad, Apr 8, 2002.

  1. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The melody of my soul sing
    a song of spring through
    spirit filled motions of pen
    stroking emotions...
    As
    Blue skies arise after cold
    dark winter sessions of brisk
    wind breezes freezing overnight
    lingering over to the day...

    The essence of mother nature
    so pure blooming the earth to
    the sky right before the eye
    in disguise you arrive...

    Drifting on air unaware of me
    noticing you over there as the
    wind blows I chase you wanting
    to catch you to dance with you...

    Everytime I run you run with the
    spring breeze touching you and it’s
    kinda fun just playing in the sun
    with you having fun...

    I reach out for you to come to me
    so I can write upon the surface of
    you about me about we about eternity
    definitley speaking within me...

    So hopefully when you get through
    playing with my emotions and come
    from out of the spring breezes blowing
    I could finish my motion of pen stroking
    emotions...
     
  2. MsPoetic

    MsPoetic Active Member MEMBER

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    Poetically Divine

    Nice Flo' Brutha

    Poetic
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad,

    I love this piece.
    I totally enjoyed the read.
    Great imagery.

    Scribeallaboutit!

    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shad,

    This was a kewl springtime read dawg!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  5. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks!!

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    GQ, Preciate da read Bruh!!

    Coco, Glad U liked!!

    MsPoetic, Just try'n to keep the flo Sista thanks for stopping by!!

    Much Love to All:heart:
     
  6. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    straight up luvly poetic verse!

    luvd it brutha!
    dee
     
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    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful painting Rembrandt!
    absolute~ly love~ly

    :heart:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad.


    very... very... VERY nice brother dear!

    is it just me... or is everything more
    beautiful in spring? i love-did it! :)

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BRING ON DA SUMMER ......MAN I LOVE DIS PIECE
     
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    Dat was a very "see you next life time" equivalent. I could feel the projected energy of one to another as the imagery of cool wind, breezes, and pens in motions sketching emotions. Tight, nuff said.
     
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