Black Poetry : ~~~~~~~PANTOMIME~~~~~~~~

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  1. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alone,
    center stage.
    Silence.
    No sound.
    Deafening.
    Rely on movement and
    cry drawn-on tears,
    Speech through gestures
    and I silently hold back the years.
    I
    Pantomime.

    Spotlight and my
    face is instantly painted white.
    I stand or sit idly by and let everyday
    things wash over me.
    No response verbally,
    only movements and through arms
    in the shape of a hyperbola.
    I arch and move wildly, then smoothly.
    No understanding
    and no care.
    A white-face, black-rimmed eyes
    and nothing more.
    I
    Pantomime.

    A life spent
    with no expression from my sea,
    silent picture in a portrait of me.
    There seems to be no end
    to my role and I feel like I’m out of time.
    I can't even speak, but I can only
    Pantomime.

    ~Copyright 2004
    "Sweetdaddy Jazz" Publishing
    ~*PropheticNsyght
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a quiet sadness portrayed here, echoing in the soul. Deeply written and felt.
     
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    feelin ya flow
    yes posed very well
    ....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep emotional sadly scribe well felt too
     
  5. PropheticNsyght

    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again, no matter how I feel or what i'm going thru; all I have to do is look on here at the responses and I feel so so so good. Thank you all for your continuous support and love. God bless.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    if you go away for two days...one can miss the flows..
    and i missed this one...but the spirit sent me backto the #22
    and there was you...
    all silent and moving but standing still in your
    mimesque way..
    you reminded me of the great ones, Barreau (i'm spellingit wrong, have to go see Les Enfant du Paridise to get it right) , Marceau, Paul Curtis..with
    your poem..Great Artist...and Wonderful Flow you1
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Darling you make me feel so loved and wonderful. Thank you so much for your beauty.
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow!
    this was also really nice. It's really nice to read how you paint that picture with words. Enjoyed this.
    greetz. moham
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much for your love and support. Blessings