Black Poetry : pandemonium

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thepoetsean, Apr 30, 2001.

  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your overall being is--
    beautiful--

    you overshine--
    all that is known to man--
    like--

    aurora borealis or--
    haley's comet or--
    long lasting love between two people--
    that look at each other and see the first time they met...

    i can't see you--
    but i see our kids--

    (****!)

    thoughts of you bring tumultuous
    *pandemonium to everyday life--

    girl...excuse me...queen--

    kiss me.
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SEANY!!......

    I Am Lovin It!!....

    ...with every poetic breath I possess! :)

    i've said it before... & i'll say it again...

    You, Sir... are Brilliant!!

    AlwaysLove...
    SunShyne~
     
  3. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I mean...

    ...you are so, indescribably, amazing. What's a girl to do in the aftermath of, such, a piece? Very thorough, poet. *Loving this...:D*
     
  4. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    maple. sunshyne...

    i lub y'all!





    thanks for feelin' my vision.
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    seannn...this heyah is another tyght piece comin' from you and i am truly lovin' it, ofcourse!

    ~~lettheinkdrop~~