Quiet Poetry Lounge : Palace of the Mist

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Jan 18, 2008.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He came as a mist to the palace of my thought
    a stranger has capture my heart,

    The vision is blurry,
    Yet
    So appealing

    Releasing in a art well known
    Traveling within the flow
    A deep romance
    Wrapped in his arms
    The final dance

    That
    led to
    an incredible chronicle
    nonfiction encounter
    With

    Narrative whispers
    of

    “Yeah baby
    I want you so"

    "Oh baby
    I need your love”

    Feeling
    Driven

    Feeling
    Wild

    Heart in a flame
    I dropped to ink
    What
    Throb
    from my encounter
    from my heart
    more then a thought

    Carrying a tone
    That was played by him
    The melody
    Was
    Just
    So
    sweet
    Yes
    so warm
    Holding that note
    Once again
    Enjoying this
    Harmonic romance


    Having
    No regrets
    To
    Plunge
    Once again
    In the mist
    To
    Feel
    The warmth
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Music as sweet as this will have gorillas in your MIST

    But gentlemen insist, do be mine.

    Lovely Work, this. PEACE.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    where do i get into this mist
    i wanna seal it wit a kiss
    so u can feel my bliss
    and da warmth to da heart glist

    do i need a number or what ?

    had me feeling all big and stuff like it was me whewwwwwww!!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Talk about a quiet and peaceful flow, such an ease to each line poetess.
     
  5. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey 1poets
    Thank you for the love, This is the Palace of Mist
    The jouney is just getting started..lol.. Thank you warrior for th elove
    Hey Rich
    The Palace is Open only to those who have the heart
    for passion and love, so you know your key works here.lol
    You are Welcome please do come in
    and warm the heart, and feel the warmth.
    lol..thank you so much foe the love
    Hey watiz
    Thank you sis. I'm just enjoying life. And having some fun on the way..lol
    Thank you so much for the love
    Thank you so much family for peepin and sharing your thoughts on
    my drop

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like how you ended it, "in the midst to feel the warmth".

    I felt like I flowed there with you.

    Desert Storm
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Desert Storm
    Thank you sis for the love on this drop
    I was just a crusing right along.
    Thanks again sis for the love

    Peace~N~Love

     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mos welcome. and I see you reppin' from Baltimore,MD, where some of my fam is from! do ya thang!
    DS
     
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