Black Poetry : Painting of Love

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hail Love, hail Love, because Love is divine.
    It is tender, it is beautiful and benign.

    What passion, what passion, we are burning like the sun.
    It is hidden and obscure, it is an obvious sign.

    We've fallen, we've fallen, it is hard to rise up.
    We know not, we know not, this complex chaotic design.

    Hail the moon, hail the moon, it is curved like a cup.
    To the features and the world, it gave shape, shade and line.

    Dismounted, dismounted, his horse the King of Kings.
    Hail the dust, hail the dust, that his trail would define.

    What picture, what picture, is drawn on the canvass of the heart.
    How strange, how strange, with the heavens must align.

    Be the silent jug, be the silent jug, that holds the secret.
    From the left, from the right, everyone seeks that wine.

    This brook has such a song, that turns our fortune's wheel.
    Not of fate, not of song, neither of this clay of mine.

    Neither trap, nor of chain, then why do we feel encaged?
    What shackle and what rope is so strong yet so fine?


    D. Howard ( HODEE )

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we've fallen and it's hard to rise up ...just blew me away
    Hail love is devine under hidden passion this piece was tyte
    had me thinking off a spell .......love the drop bruh !
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You $$RICH$$. I wrote this some time ago published it on poetry.com and just read it again for the first time myself today. I was in my Shakespere mood I believe.
     
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    beautifull....



    loveauroraflower:heart:
     
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    Hmmm........Beautiful piece:spinstar: You PAINTED this one oh so lovely (as always) :welldone:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Something very regal about this piece, painted with a golden brush.
     
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    Hodee:

    Luvin' this flo

    What passion, what passion, we are burning like the sun.
    It is hidden and obscure, it is an obvious sign.


    I'm really feeln' that.

    Much Luv
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hodee love the way you put it down love like a beautiful song you are to me.
     
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