Black Poetry : painted love (in response to hyperspace by SGS)

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    twisted and turned--
    like the paintbrush to canvas--
    unsure of my direction--
    my color--
    my time--
    my space--
    my identity--

    but life is unsureity.

    i have love for you but it seems that--
    you said that...
    i never meant to love you--
    i can't comprehend the meaning...that's what you said.
    you said i painted love across the blank canvas of my heart--
    brushed strokes, against the grain of my barren atriums--

    "yo heart don't pump no over-sweetened kool-aid"
    that's what you said.

    but it does.
    and i do love--
    you and everything you entail

    but
    you have painted eyes--
    brushed strokes with the running water of your tears--

    giving up--
    makes your palette complete.


    shegaveuponourloveandididtoo.

    sean.
     
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    Poet

    your prose is so very expressive...I get a portrait, concise, sometimes with a surreal ~feel~ but ALWAYS beauty to the 10th power in my mind's eye.

    I applaud your work! :) Thank you.

    A
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TPSEAN...

    ...& i'm standing ryght behind MS A...
    clapping loud as hell!! :)

    this was... this was... exceptionally beautiful!!
    keep doin' your thing poet... this is You at
    your best!! now you done gone & made me your
    numba one fan!! ThatsReal...

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
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    Sean,

    The word "talent" is written all ova ya pieces man!!!

    Nice work!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love iz love

    miss A~
    1000 thanx to the queen that always smellz me.

    GQ & Sunshyne--
    thank u two again for humbling me with your presence.


    plantinumshinesbutwordscanbeuraniumifusedcorrectly


    sean.
     
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    ***stepping in from the peaceful meadow***

    Sean, the maestro of the pen, dipping it eloquently into the can of paint to create verbal visuals like those of Michealangelo as he rested on his back to create the greatest of all artwork...

    keep scribin the way you do for i am truly taking notes over here...

    ***leaving a trail of leaves as i exit***
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the love is ever-present!!!

    thanks d!!!!
     
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    standing o!!!!

    the fact that something I wrote inspired you moves me inexplicably hunnie


    i am truly honored and humbled

    thank you so much


    *soaring through hyperspace*
     
  9. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this one was just thanking you...

    for showing love and posting at my dying club...thanks SGS!!!
     
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