Quiet Poetry Lounge : PAINT ME

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PurpleMoons, Aug 30, 2004.

  1. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Paint me a river with oceans so blue
    within it put muti-colors, like pastel
    peach, purple, green of all hues
    I'll swim across it as the swiftest of fish
    exploring its vastness with every last push

    Paint me a cloud the largest you ever seen
    so on a humid hot day I will be sucked up
    between it. I'll travel the skies looking down
    on the scenes. and shower the earth with
    my wetness to clean it.

    Paint me a mountain that reach to the skies
    so I can become an Eagle soaring up high
    I'll squawk out my awareness to all of the world
    then swoop on top of my mountain in spiraling swirls

    Paint me a jungle the wildest in the land with
    thick green trees all over the Mediterranean
    so I can be a Black Panther perched high in a tree
    looking down on its creatures residing there with me

    Paint me a warrior tribe the fearless of all
    drums beating, fire burning, chantings of war
    I'll envoke the creator invested in me
    and invite him to celebrate his ultimate being

    Paint me a Rainbow with flavored colored stripes
    So I can sit on top....adhere my tongue.....
    and slid all the way down it. Mmmmmm tasty!!!

    Just Paint me my love! use your hands as the tools
    My body is your canvas. your creativity are your jewel.
    paint me your passion, your fondest desires
    then seal me with your kiss until the day that I expire

    Just paint me Baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can paint u a river
    so true & spray it in
    multi colors of u

    i can paint u da cloud
    above inside a gentle
    love & hug

    i can paint u a mountain
    so high on top will feel
    da swift breeze and come
    to a tender please

    i can paint u da fighter
    of thruth & honor the
    worrior of hope & faith
    where no one can stop
    da trace of a fearless face

    i can paint u a rainbow
    of colorful love in a lustful
    red burning orange da black
    essence and purple passion
    blue/green like a sexy dream

    i can paint a comforting love
    cross ya heart up & down ya
    body parts hand swifty move
    to da sway as i paint away
    i can splash da color of love
    in grace paint a rapture in ya
    secret place i can paint as artist
    do and bring a bliss to u be my
    canvas let be do and paint away
    all ova u
    I CAN PAINT WHAT U CAN'T SEE !
     
  3. PurpleMoons

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    :jawdrop:

    Can you really? could you? would you do this for me?

    LOL! Thank you brother Rich
    for your heart warming reply!!! :love:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes i could
    sure i would
    happy to
    paint what u can't see , yet u feel
    my hands da brush of real thrills
    most welcome my sistah u took me on this painting journey
    now i wanna paint love and u in my mind .......sho i can do it!....lol
     
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    Well then, Paint me a horizon setting at dawn
    while I stretch out my arms beyond what is norm

    Paint me a serpent so muscular strong
    so it can slither around me while casting it's charm

    Paint me a teardrop so tiny and small
    it seeps out when pleasure has ruptured my walls

    Paint me a tortoise so eloquently slow
    to cover all areas that none has covered before

    Paint me Lion with a fierce mighty roar
    to conquer my inquisitiveness when I become bored

    Paint me a hyena so humble and meek
    to tickle my fancy before falling asleep

    Paint me a king with a heart as pure as love
    to insure me his intentions won't alter the above

    Just paint me! Paint me what ever you wish
    I'll just close my eyes and envision the mix
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WILL DO FOR YOUR EYES ONLY
    I SHALL PAINT U A VISION OF COLOR
    A FORM OF BLISS A GENTLE LOVE FROM
    ABOVE I WILL PAINT U IN DA ESSENCE
    AS NIGHT FALL I'LL ANSWER DA CALL
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a potent earthy vision, you painted quite the masterpiece here. Vibrant.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was painted beautifully!
     
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    Good heavens, this is so very beautiful.......wow!!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow...sis you out did your self...
    tight wonderful write!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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