Black Poetry : Paint Me Rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by amberly, Feb 10, 2003.

  1. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Search for me no more
    I am on a cloud of nine
    Easily I see what is meant by,
    Love
    You, hand outstretched
    Like Leonardo da Vinci
    highlighted wonder
    Paint me rain,
    Your personal drizzle
    So I will sprinkle into the atmosphere,
    Misting you with eager dew
    leave-taking giddy straight from your heart
    Earth tones shades are…
    Fluorescent brightest colors
    Shall we share this rainbow together?



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  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bright Lights

    Amberly, this has really good content. Keep the bright lights burning.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was very well posed i really like dis one
     
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    Agree...nicely done!!!!

    :heart:
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