Black Poetry : Paint Me Love

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  1. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Paint me love in every shade of passionate red,
    Draw me the perfection of your beautiful smile,
    Sculpt me making sweet love to your god-like self,
    Colour me every shade of your happiest dreams,
    Write for me your every mind image and thought,
    Sing for me the unknown secrets of your soul,
    Make for me an image of your deepest loving desire,
    Scribe for me, your most favourite fantasy,
    Create for the vision of your perfect love.


    17/2/02
    *Emma*
     
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    if i was to
    paint for you
    a portrait of my
    passionate self
    you would see me
    decend into the valley
    of the shadows of death

    where i wept

    beseeched by lust
    set upon by sixty-niners
    ...front and back recliners
    and lesbians
    inviting me in
    and all sort of sinning
    was going on

    as if i did no wrong

    my burden was heavy
    as i waded through
    naivete

    naked women heaped
    upon me
    and everywhere my eyes did see
    were fornicators
    adulterers
    lying before me
    as with sodom and gomorrah
    the moaning did not break
    cast thee in the lake
    to suffer thy fate
    please
    take this cup from before me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful flow ......keep da brush wet
     
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    very lovely!!
     
  5. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller - Thanks for the poetic reply, you put a smile on my face today :)

    Rich - I appreciate the love as always

    Amberly - Thanks for dropping by

    *Emma*
     
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