Black Poetry : Paint Me Invisible

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by amberly, May 3, 2003.

  1. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    paint me translucent
    so that wickedness
    aimed in my direction
    will just travel straight though me

    dye me shades of transparent
    so that you can feel my spirit
    and not judge me from my
    outer appearance.

    cover me with thinner
    so that I will dissolve away
    into air and live freely
    without deceitfulness

    tint me impossible to see
    so that I will be hidden
    from treachery and deception.
    and detestation can’t find me


    Paint Me Invisible…






    ©2003amberly
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADE TO ORDER

    Paint me the wondrous colors of your palette-

    Very nice, Amberly

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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    paint me invisible,
    because visible is what I really wanna be.
    paint me invisible,
    because without you there's no me.
    paint me invisble,
    becuase I don't wanna carry on,
    paint me invisible,
    till I disappear into the unknown.

    I liked your poem, so meaningful and beautiful all at once.
    peace and blessins and keep flowin :):):)
     
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    cypher Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    freedom calls....loved it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte vibe well posed
     
  6. byin

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    nice.
    keep flowin' ma.

    byin.
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed

    A lovely picture...

    Reas
     
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