Black Poetry : Paint me a portrait/picture(unfinished)

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Paint me a portrait
    where i'll always b close 2 u, knowin everythin about u. no secrets, no lies, like im one of the guys.

    Paint me a picture
    where ur strokes tell me that i mean everythin 2 u. includin the stars, ocean, and the moon.

    Paint me a portrait
    where ur colors r so bright. so i know this is right.
     
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    Picture Perfect!!!

    1poetsought ~
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx 1poetsought......glad u enjoyed the read....much love.... :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    painting u this picture of love
    it was scribe on da wingz of doves
    a soulful Queen
    a gentle heart together how we start
    as i paint
    i hold u near
    caress ya mental
    save u from fears
    ever so close my heart lay
    speak of truth in a uplifting way
    my honesty tell it all
    see the picture
    ur da beauty of it all
    let me tell u how it is
    under the candle lite dinner
    between two friendz
    whispers of compassion
    laughter too
    watch u ever so dear
    a perfect picture painted in ya honor
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwww, thanx $$Rich$$.that was just to sweet.......much love :)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this....i really do.....keep 'em comin'...
     
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    paint me a picture. theres a comfort in those words. beautiful.
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx purple n lovelygoldenone, that was much appreciated...much love, lookin 4ward 2 some more of ur works............. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most humble dear Queeneth ..............likewise
     
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