Quiet Poetry Lounge : PAINT BRUSH

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jun 25, 2011.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Today I wanna paint myself
    a beautiful world peace
    a place of love no sinful beast

    I wanna paint happiness in lives
    a perfect woman to be wived
    stroked in perfection of blend

    I wanna canvas a morrow of joyment
    open ventures like never before
    paint softly a garment to paradise

    I wanna paint experience and goodness
    like a nun face of mercy n' grace
    a delicious meal of love to behold in

    I want to brush a storm of memories
    to have trhunderous cascading moments
    and revel all it's clustered violets n' roses

    I wanna paint you inside kisses
    of refreshments like ripe nectar
    and da benefits of my stance

    I just wanna paint brush moonbeams
    so radiant as it glist in da starz
    crossin da orbits of my galaxy

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    may i share your brush for a moment please
    splash a brilliant sun there
    dab your beautiful world here
    swirl our love over there
    smear my imperfections all over the canvas
    your colors are wonderfully vivid
    dip all of me in your artistry
    create a picture of a strong bridge for me to cross

    your picture is the portrait
    painted on my heart
    you cannot lose my love,
    it is true and only yours
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    painting beauty in it's finest feels good when the portrait is finished
     
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    we will finish the portrait together. painting a masterpiece of love...for i believe.
     
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    each stroke devine as it's delievered
     
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    My paint is now dry
    for da love i cannot find
    as each stroke dem in da light
    one i will no longer fight
    so i place my brush inside da case
    close da paint wit pain on da face
    canvas still drips to be trace
    as i take my love up in grace
    softly my stroke become song
    in my heart tyme never wrong
    but da feeling where has it gone
    i've heard it in such tone
    let me walk as i am
    for the day is my last swipe
    da brush is dry as air .
     
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    As the paint floats upon the air
    Red radiant sun comes out and splashes the eye
    Orange blends with a refreshment of yellow
    Summer time is really here
    Ultimently the hibernation of the greens and oranges plus the yellows yet always return
    To become a wet chill that can always be seen and heard
     
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    true indeed it will continue returning more more
     
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    Yes your writing do make a wonderful picture :)
     
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    Thank you PisceanStorm for the visit and warmth do look to see more of you
    as we scribe and grow poeticly....
     
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