Quiet Poetry Lounge : Paint a picture

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Jun 4, 2002.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Come to life
    As I paint a picture
    Of the fine details of my life

    Come to life
    As I paint a picture
    Of reality, and strife

    Come to life
    As I paint a picture

    Of something so pure,real,and allure

    Wish I didn't keep guessing

    On the outside
    It looks so clear

    To the painter
    She can see imperfections
    That need to be fixed

    Paint a picture
    Of love so real
    You don't have to feel

    It's just there

    My best friend
    Should be love

    My first love
    Should be love

    My hope should be in love

    My love
    Shouldn't be tainted

    Or saddened
    Or live in fear

    My love
    Should appear
    The way it is

    Like when you paint a picture

    Desert Storm
     
  2. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice

    your poem was well written. peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved the way u paint pic... and we can look into it deep
    and see da depth of truth & love
    flow on !
     
  4. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beauiful please continue
     
  5. alter

    alter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like dis too ... i really like da way u put dis togetha...love's so elusive it b mysterious...n u got dat 'cross real well.
     
  6. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You
     
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