Black Poetry : PAINFULLY HONEST

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  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FIRST OFF
    FIRST LINE
    FIRST THOUGHT
    OUT OF MY MIND
    IS
    SUCCESS ISNT WHAT DRIVES ME
    ALTHOUGH PERSISTENCE LIES IN ME
    MONEY ISN'T WHAT IGNITES ME
    ITS THE LOOK ON THE FACES THAT RIDE WITH ME
    CUZ I PROMISE
    I DONT GIVA [email protected] IF I LIGHT LIKE THE LIME
    CUZ TO BE HONEST
    PARADISE TO ME IS ****** N HOOPIN ALL DAY N WRITIN' SOME RHYMES
    I DONT WANT LOVE AT THE MOMENT, IM JUST LOOKIN FOR SOME ACTION
    CUZ I GOT ALOT GOIN ON AND RELATIONSHIPS ARE JUST A FRACTION
    CUZ I'M DEDICATED TO MY BALL AND SCHOOL, SEX IS JUST ATTRACTION
    NOT SAYING ITS IMPOSSIBLE, BUT AS IF NOW- IM RELAXING

    I DONT WANNA GET CAUGHT UP INTO SUMTHIN THATS TOO MUCH
    CUZ WHEN I LEAVE IM NOT TAKIN ANY BAGGAGE, JUST A BALL N A TOOTHBRUSH
    CUZ RIGHT NOW
    IM NOT TRYNA BE TIED DOWN
    CUZ I JUST CLIMBED OUT
    OF HEARTBREAK HOTEL
    CUZ MY EX WAS SHARIN HER KAT LIKE SHOW 'N' TELL
    SO NOW I DONT SPRINT THE FAST TRACK, I'LL LET THE BIRDS FLY
    ITS BAD TO MESS WITH EM, EVEN WORSE WHEN THEY RIDE
    AND A GOLD DIGGER CAN DIG, BUT IM NOT GONNA PAY
    CUZ MY PHILOSOPHY IS I NEVER SPEND MORE THAN I WEIGH
    ITS NOT MUCH MA, U GOTTA BE EXTRA SPECIAL
    U GOTTA HAVE THAT TOUCH MA, CONNECT W/ ME ON LEVELS BESIDES SEXUAL
    I TRY TO KEEP DRAMA AND ISSUES OUT OF MY LIFE
    SO I WONT TRY TO TURN A H0 INTO A HOUSEWIFE

    AND PAPI, SAVE THE GAMES FOR THE OLYMPICS
    CUZ IM NOT INTERESTED, NEVER WILL BE, SO ZIP IT
    I DONT NEED PROMISES OR TALK OF BEIN A P I M P
    CUZ I'D RATHER JUMP OFF A CLIFF AND D.I.E
    I WONT SWEAT A MAN EITHER, I'LL LET A DOG ROAM
    CUZ I'M NO B*TCH, I WONT BARK, I'LL JUST GIVE A CAT HIS BONE
    I WONT GIVE YA A CHANCE TO GET LOW DOWN
    CUZ I KNOW UP FRONT IF U GET AROUND LIKE A MERRY GO ROUND

    U CAN SAY IM MESSED UP, BUT MOST FEEL THIS, THEY JUST DONT ACKNOWLEDGE IT
    BUT YOU READ THE TITLE BABY, IT SAID PAINFULLY HONEST
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "never spend more than I weigh" - love that line

    gooooood laaaaaaawwd, that is so tight! love tha way u throw this down. your painfully is my joy.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    wow.....this is tight..
     
  4. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REALLY? I DIDNT THINK PPL WOULD FEEL THIS ONE, CUZ ITS NOT LOVEY DOVEY LIKE USUAL BUT THANK U SO VERY MUCH.
     
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    deep thaughts
    liked the flow
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS SHAZ...
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I DONT NEED PROMISES OR TALK OF BEIN A P I M P
    CUZ I'D RATHER JUMP OFF A CLIFF AND D.I.E


    Killer line
     
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    :glasses: :glasses: o yah flow on this one madd flow
     
  9. angelicsage

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    :eek:

    Girl...u got me on so many parts...."show & tell~and ya girl", lol
    this was painfully honest and entertainingly "tyte"...

    love this flow - def' can't judge u for keeping it real...
     
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    girl...sometimes it's best to be painfully honest!...this was tighter than tight! much love
     
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