Black Poetry : Pain..

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Jan 22, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Knives hitting in my chest..
    No kiss, or huge ,hush ,carress..
    Dark night Payamma wet..
    tears forming a salty neckless...
    Morning awake swolen eyes...
    light hits me from the sky...
    today i give it another try...
    Red prints of grieve on my face...
    hands together start to pray..
    Emergancy question comes to god...

    When will it ever stop the hurting of my heart...
     
  2. Kwegan

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    I'm feeling the imagery and emotion in this piece...good work.
     
  3. PositiveMindset

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    My sweet sister, I completely dig what you're working out of.

    Truly enjoy your mind.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very heartfelt
    but they say it go away...
    wish i had a remedy for it....
    but all u can do is pray....
    and one day it will....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i felt all of dis here .....lean on me babe lean on me !
    well said
     
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    release it in the flow sis..much love to you
    Peace
    Blue:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You could just feel the heartache here...very emotionally written....sometimes it helps to write the feelings out.
     
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