Black Poetry : PAIN

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  1. tcb233

    tcb233 Member MEMBER

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    A cry, a scream, or just pure hurt,
    something or someone said or did something wrong.
    A voice came from out with a blurt,
    a realization something out of place for prolong.
    Take it away please,i can't take it any more ,
    I beg you I can take no more pain.
    Some think of revenge, a way to settle the score,
    I just look for a way out before i go insane.
    As i fal to the floor I scream out loud,
    the pain runs deep, no relief in sight.
    This black feeling has covered me in its shroud,
    against this pain I try to stand and fight.
    Now I lay down to try and get some rest, my soul to keep,
    I ask God, to help me bear it, and cry myself to sleep!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! very nice scribe .............my brutha
    what hurts will heal
    da pain u feel
    hold faith as ya pill
    by morning light
    ya heart will be thrill

    feelin' ya flow here poet
    flow on !
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is str8
    feelin the flow...
     
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    Very nice flow. Keep it coming. Heal the pain cry if you must release the rain. Rain coming down it's dry outside. But, I see the water in my eyes. Consuming thoughts of love lost blues. Clouding my mind. Causing the rue. What can I do. Can I fix this thing. Stop the hurt. Make life sing. All you can do is ride the crest. Keep my heart at peace. Let it rest.

    " Some ( do ) think of revenge, a way to settle the score. " Create pain for the one they adore. I can't invision this. It isn't what you really want you just want them to know how you feel.

    Been there. Done this. Got over some while other pain lingers. Never easing up. So I salvage the good. Forget the rest. Learn from the experience and try to rest. Dance with the heart ache when it comes. It gets you through the hard times.

    This post and some simular have me reflecting quite a bit. Over time I have come to believe that everybody, anybody that comes into your life and share your time and space. Brought something in, and took something out.

    So I try to focus on what was their gift. What did they leave me with. Did I grow. I refuse to shrink. Make sure you get what they bring. A new thought. A new idea. A good time. Good feelings. New outlook. Straight up good times. Love. They must sail on. Not meant to dock in my life to long. So while their vessel is tied to mine. I load my ship with the cargo they offer.

    To many fail to ask. The silent questions. What does this person bring with them? What are they giving me? What do I need from them? What did they leave me with? Heart questions that heal.
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel your pain in this...it was tight. lot's of love
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the emotion in this piece was radiating and quickly captivated

    leaving me speechless, so if I may.......borrow Hodee's words

    I myself was feeling them

    very emotive piece
     
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    :( yes i have begged him to take me if it meant no more pain but...I am glad he didnt :)
     
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