Black Poetry : Pain to Joy

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  1. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pain to Joy

    My dreams
    once jingled a bruised melody
    tapped my feet to a sadden drum beat
    love failed me unimaginable times
    until he fell from that castle in the sky
    with the mate to my silver slipper

    he spit tunes into my atmosphere
    funneling his every note
    I nourished my body with affection
    failing to take heed to warning
    to beware of his love I fell for his touch
    as he hummed ecstasy on my thighs
    turning my pain to joy






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  2. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    By the sound of it you need not beware of his love.
    Love the metaphors and imagery.
    Very nice.

    *Emma*
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis makes me see what love do....
    taking pain and given joy
    keep da pen scribing
     
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    This is very sweet.
     
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