Black Poetry : pain, allow her

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... to love again
    ...to see her reflection flow beautifully in the brooks again
    with self-assurance
    ...to know that there's the other side of your deep river that she can
    be one of few who cross and find re-definition
    pain, allow her
    to know the purpose of your rising heat
    and that soon
    the ground she walks will cool beneathe her feet if only she sees that
    you, pain, you don't
    hurt so bad
    you are not only there to make her sad...
    allow her to see that
    ...to live again is really your pleasure
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, I really felt this. Without pain there is not life, it is a part of being alive, posed on point.
     
  3. Khasm13

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    dude i hear you...
    i have seen she that is stricken by pain...
    this joint is precise
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop
    flow on...
    laid nice
     
  5. angelicsage

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    sometimes your depth...catches me off guard
    I've seen some write to love...but never to pain
    love the way you came with this...
    had to read it a couple of times to completely
    absorb it...and I see that sometimes the
    struggle only makes one stronger, wiser...
    and in the end happier...you captured
    this so masterfully...and if I might use your
    words....


    "Classic".... :toast:

    Everything has a purpose...even pain... :bowdown:
     
  6. ebele

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    J'hiah

    I was touched by this poem. I find comfort in it.

    Thank you...

    Ebele
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this one open me up loving ya flow bruh
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    POETICALLY PHAT!

    THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY PROFOUNDLY FABULOUS!
    OH AND DID I SAY LOVED THE WAY YOU LAID THOSE
    WORDS DOWN... :toast: :toast:
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSE!
     
  9. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz,
    say it. l feel you.

    khasm,
    it could be "he" too..
    thanx bruh

    mz,
    thanx.

    angelicsage,
    *whoa* is all l can say after seeing that.
    get at you....

    ebele,
    your reply was very warm to me.
    l'm glad it could comfort you..
    madd thanx

    $R,
    no doubt...

    luscious,
    you are dat bomb thang girl.
    know this.

    thanx for the love famlee....

    no pain no gain
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah I always like whatever piece you drop down because I feel itsooo much :)
     
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