Quiet Poetry Lounge : PAGE #14 oneluv series continue (serenade)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As i lay in my slumber of love
    wit thoughts of your soul
    my heart river in beats rapidly
    I know of thee unconditionally
    and i've felt your warmth
    yet my mind lingers in da maze
    as another start to our never ending
    story of distance love

    We empowered our view of envision
    and see thee wit da third eye
    my love for u is more then a tale
    and what i feel is more realism

    How do i express da emotions
    of loneliness when i think of u
    and what words do i say
    when near u that have me speechless

    Well let me say through dis SERENADE

    Inside my chamber of slumber i rise
    from da dreameth of thee
    in da first sweet sleep of night
    when da windz breath low
    as da moon drop beyond starz glow
    i rise from da dreameth of u
    as da spirits move my feet
    unknowing how yet to da chambers
    windowz of love i so find thee sweet

    Da airs of us we fan in depth
    on da darken but silent night
    as our mentals take flight
    to where hearts loom & embrace
    O' beloved as thou art
    o lift me unto your tyme
    and let thou love in kisses rain
    dance upon ones lips tenderly
    as thy eyez pale deep into my love
    and wilt thou have me fashion
    into speech of da love i bear thee
    finding words enough and hold close
    so forth it touch while da windz
    blow between faces to cast light

    I so weep not in pain but joy
    and forever more hold da essence
    u have left upon my space of tyme
    where my love aloof and da taste
    i savor for only u have given
    i leave this page another night
    as i dreameth upon da nightengale
    of ya beauty and cares for i am .

    :pc: :kiss1: :)
     
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    A gentle tap on the shoulder
    in the midst of night
    tells me that once again
    we're going to take flight
    A journey where love touches
    through many, many miles
    leaving me spent with wonder
    and elated, tearful smiles
    Words cannot quite capture
    the splendor, nor, the rapture
    But emotions can and do
    flow through
    My eyes now rest
    upon page fourteen
    How feelings can be revealed,
    and what they truly mean
    when reality is kissed
    within our dreams
    for I truly do exist
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Existance of love
    like neverending tales
    da story of many mysteries
    and da place of heart
    each page to every chapter
    lay in da wake of morrow
    i knoweth thy loveth
    and hear da cry of love
    felt da embrace in moments
    and knoweth it's real
    yes one do exist ................
     
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    The beauty in your words
    extend far beyond this page
    Can't think of any measurement
    that can adequately gauge
    the impression
    of your expression
    Consider me
    speechless...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I't's not of thy words
    whom speaketh but
    thy heart dat knoweth
    and say unconditionally
    u are
    through expression
    of one's submission
    leave dat impression
    that i am
     
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    So beautiful, passionate and tender
    one would be a fool not to surrender
    to this exquisite Serenade of Love.
    The stars must be sparkling down
    on thee…..
    This has to be the loveliest of them all
    Absolutely positively an AMAZING
    Page 14
     
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    O' sis of love every page is a note
    inside da note is compassion
    da beauty is da depth calling
    as another page is to be written

    #15 coming soon !

    Thank u from my heart happy u enjoyed this series and page by page
    and for visiting each one means a lot 4EVERLUV
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow guys!
    Your serenades lifted me up a little higer today.
    Just what I needed to read.
     
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    most welcome Moham thankz for the visit and may it lift u high
     
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