Quiet Poetry Lounge : PAGE #11 (New Melodies)

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Melodies of whispering soundz
    rumbles, turn as love moundz
    echo's of slittering morrow
    through da tearz of my sorrow
    there's a face sweet and kind
    that lingers in da depth of my mind

    As i only see her passing by
    my heart beats rapidly shell not lie
    it's daja vu ova again
    through da rapture of thy friend
    fighting the woves of this web
    upon da pillow as i lay my head

    On gestures i react
    un-aware of the reality facts
    yet my soul is take by da smile
    deep charm in motions of miles
    my heart no not why
    and i still have this love until i die

    Freely sprun through da spell
    and envison da image where i dewell
    my behaviour somehow lost
    yet my honesty ready to pay da cost
    i know not why , i touch her not
    lone to behold between my arms
    release the love and untouched charm

    Here again a beginning beyond harm
    as my mental clash to ring da alarm
    telling me of a fate set in stone
    cascading in a melody tone
    like Fe , La , Te , La souls
    of two lovers tweed and mold

    Your mouth that i member
    with a rush of sudden pain
    spoken as it wrap in my brain
    i can't get pass this surprise
    of a rose that blooms & rise
    wishing for da kiss i never had

    Melodies of musical notes
    swoop in da windz kissing tones
    you love me so little
    who could not love me long
    giveth me wings of happiness
    lent my spirit song

    O' ye i cry in galloping hope
    pass da noost of da rope
    callin throughout da night
    til morn salty day light
    searching for thy love
    in da melody of thy dove
    as it mill high above

    As page 11 come to a close
    i can smell the morrow rose
    yet tears and fears will rise
    in da well of my eyez
    as melodies ring in tone
    from da glistin song i moan..
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes a mind knows not, the love and care the heart has got. That's why it pays to listen to your heart, and hear those melodies. The beauty of this resonates. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Often what one see and feel is deep emotions embedded yet the mind
    moves one in a direction unknown beyond what is as love swoops in deeper
    the depth of reality sets in......Thank u Watz for the visit and love on this mental
    chapter of 11
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    nobody does it like this anymore...Rich...tight rhyme scheme...great topic, great depth of perspective...

    this is real writing here....im lovin it.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    why thank you ...nice to see ya pen flickering again
    beside you a real classic poet ya self
     
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    This page 11 sends my heart fluttering
    To the heavens
    Once battered and worn
    But time surely heals
    All wounds and I have forgiven you

    For I know my sadness
    Was not your intent
    And I’ve had time to heal and vent
    No bitterness only sweetness
    Sealed with a kiss
    Is what my heart remembers

    Please dry your eyes
    There is no need to cry
    How many times must I tell you
    That you are an awesome guy
    And some things take a little more time

    You touched my soul
    With your page 9
    And I could read it a million times
    Becuz beauty always flowz
    From your pen

    Tender words one can never forget
    And your heart is filled
    With so much pleasantness
    Every time I think you could not
    Possibly scribe a piece that’s better

    Look what you do
    You go and pen
    This lovely page 11
    :blowkiss:
     
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    waving back to page nine
    that hit notes of melody time
    spelling in deeper love
    as my heart race above
    your words touch my soul
    like a picture painted gold
    as the next page drip in red
    from these feelings in my head
    12 express like an confess
    of thy mystery chess
    thank u dearly for continue love
    through all da pain and snub
    as i filter out my reasons
    like our four seasons
    as da love keep callin
     
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