Quiet Poetry Lounge : PAGE # 10 Da aftermath

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Not awaken to none avoid

    striking deep to da heart cord
    from the misty clay
    and the love my soul now lay
    empty as the sea shell
    under this sensual spell

    Claiming only my yesterday
    through da window of today
    searching into my morrow
    capture by the mental sorrow
    art thou not my sweetest flower
    which whom become thy prowler

    My love was forsaken as da beast
    yet my warm afloat and release
    into this pillow i spill my tears
    behind da pillow lay my fears
    the world will never know us as we
    because our minds yet not free

    I tap down what i feel
    and speak only what is real
    someday i can reveal thy face
    from da chambers of da secret place
    i so loveth u to cherish
    may my wish be heard and not perish

    O' ye thy barefoot in da sand
    i compromise to be that man
    unto u i am thy King
    to my heart ur my beloved queen
    eyes dat watch from afar
    my cascading beauty where ever u are

    Know that i am
    as i stain this page again
    wit da quill of my pen
    to da canvas i scribe
    yet imcompleted task
    page 11 i shall cast.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are not in this pain alone...
    yet, it was you..who cause me to roam.
    I gave you my all..holding nothing back,
    in all the mist of it, there was something I lack.

    Perhaps other grass seemed Greener to the eye,
    and at the same time, I was left here to cry.
    I never intend to hurt you, but time do move on,
    cause I wondered for the longest...what I did wrong.

    Page#10 was beautiful, in what you had to say,
    In Page#11, I wish you well..as we go our separate way.

    Nice drop Rich..thanks for the flow:welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....queent that was one hella come backer whewwwwwww
    let me see what i can do ..............................................................

    I know my body did u wrong
    but my love in heart stayed strong
    upon this mask of pain
    it's u i'll whisper and name
    as i lay inside my slumber
    as these feelings begin to rumbles

    what thy eyes seen
    what nothing compare to thy queen
    i know u gave ya whole
    and what ya love truely behold
    i'm sorry for my dismay
    and i step out to play

    maybe someday ur know my love
    and my chambers up above
    as tyme start to move
    it's u my beloved that i lose
    as i turn another page
    to free myself from this mental cage

    thank u for the flow and enjoyed it sis
    do come again to share in another page.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, Beautiful I must say....

    It seems as though it was only yesterday
    That 2 hearts beat as 1 you and I
    Our journey had just begun
    Floating on clouds not knowing how
    We got there but didn’t really care
    Some things are just special like that
    Beyond what most people can understand
    Or comprehend it was true romance
    But some how we knew without having any clues
    There was no need to pick or choose
    It was so comfortable like a pair of broke in shoes

    But like every thing in life trials and tribulations
    Manifested what we had vested and tore it down
    Like an angry wind blowing through a quite town
    What use to be smiles turned in frowns
    Left our hearts drowning under ground
    Begging for the pounding to stop
    How could something so precious become so lost

    I thank God for tomorrows they are new beginnings
    An end to the sorrow
    With every passing day the hurt eases away
    Pain no more time to explore what life has in store
    And I rather to have loved than to have not
    Although you and I are not a we
    I still have love for you
    cuz you are so very special to me

    I hope and pray that one day
    you will find your Queen
    and she will be every thing
    your heart and soul can dream

    Now that we have turned the page
    Released our hearts from all the rage
    It can only get better
    Than what it was yesterday
    As we embark upon page 11​



    queen:
    Your flo back was tyte. You just keep doing it sista.
     
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    4EVERLUV.........

    Just like yesterday and the form we stay
    inside the graft of lovin hearts
    where da winds blew from da start
    i can still picture the dearing glaze
    and the southen blaze
    through the pages we turn
    still there's this simple yearn
    like 9 da aftermath comes
    yet sin weathers in da trend
    as page 10 now set aside
    page 11 is where my heart reside
    someday - somehow - someway
    but today inside my chambers i lay
    another night alone .
     
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    Worry not, I know this feeling you feel
    And sometimes its so hard to deal
    One thing I know to be true
    She will come to you …
    And you will know it when she do
    Your heart is filled with love
    I know our father above will not
    Leave you in this state
    Something special is on its way to you
    You just keep being you
    And know that you are never alone
    You will find your comfort zone
    Make sure you let me know when you do
    So I can say “ I told you so BOO”:)
     
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    dat was cute
    like an passion fruit
    yet it seem so far off
    til my heart & soul is lost
    another page written
    stain in the salty tears
    as the chapter change
    maybe again my love will gain
    trying to stay sane
    yet i am da blame
    page 11 will i claim my aim
     
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    Sure you will, the fate is sealed
    You have lovely poetic appeal
    among other things...

    That will be one lucky Queen
    Because she will have
    a very special King.


    Thanks for the flo $$RICH$$, it is always
    a pleasure.

    Much Luv
     
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    likewise forever luv likewise
     
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    Return of the PAGE and it's aftermath of 10 as 11 begin
     
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