Black Poetry : P.S. I Love You

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Feb 3, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Since mankind's beginning
    True love is winning
    The whole wide world

    Sweet precious ladies
    Our hearts persuaded
    Been sweating... girls

    She's re-inventing,
    This man's intentions
    My baby girl...

    Full body divas...
    No make believers
    Queens- are pearls

    Black beauty steals the movie
    She's a such a cutie...
    Her mind and body intact!

    You completely do me
    While I'm on duty
    Spitting rhymes ~ designed to mack

    P.S. I love you...
    Hope this corrupts you
    I'm coming back, and staying black


    (Happy Valentine)


    1poetsought
    copyright 2003
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alrighty now this was a veyr tight flow indeed....bring some mo'!!!
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Check the edit.

    BISH- Your encouragement is most meaningful.
    kemetstry- Thanks! You too, are a messenger of hope.

    1poetsought
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1poet

    Excellent scribe bro!!!

    Keep the fellas leading!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  5. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Done Deal

    GQ.............. We Winning from the beginning. 1poetsought
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man open up da hearts
    u done dis hands down!
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You got me over here swooning!

    This is so enjoyable to see such intrinsic expressions of love. Makes me all warm and fuzzy inside....Nicely done!

    Blessings on Ya House!
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the ending worked for me....says a whole lot right there...

    K
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "It's a family affair"

    msluciousb, your words carry the weight of the superb.

    Kitana, pleased that one as savvy as you can appreciate a proper ending.

    $$RICH$$, originality is our speciality- but the more I grow-up, the more I wanna flow like you!

    1poetsought
     
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    You did me proud

    Elmo, you scribe... vessels are we who speak of trees.

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