Black Poetry : OysterPearl in Vain...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Sep 24, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Closed between two Walls
    She knows that faith can make it out there
    but thinks she is cursed for life...
    She loves people to much..
    and gets dissaponted and looses herself..
    She love's Life to much..
    and love's herself less..
    works to much...
    and is lazy...
    She wants to open the Gate...
    and come out....
    but is tired and wants to sleep...
    Loves the Lord much ....
    as much as she Forgets that He loves her..

    No Hu- MAn has seen her Treu Beauty....


    She lay,s there in her black Shell..

    at the bottom of the Ocean.....





    Will she be Found ?.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very nice like how u painted this picture
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LibertyLady, I truly feel you on this one. I have stemmed from contradictions all my life - including some of these. Much love to ya, girl, for this piece. :heart:
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    girl...you did paint a picture with this...
    love your vibe...
     
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    I could visualize it as I was going along.. great piece..
     
  6. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm with gempis on this one...you painted a picture of every person really...i loved this and i could really feel it as i was reading. good job and much love.
     
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    this is a very interesting concept
    a+ for originality on dis piece...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is really the joint!
     
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