Khasm13 : overzealous fellas

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yo...
    i tire of reading overzealous fellas...with da tunnel vision
    so they stay jealous...tell us how you do your thang
    don't worry bout nobody else...kick your slang mayne
    don't keep lookin at the next man...when u need to be perfect'n your craft
    understand?...i know you can't be that daft...catch this life raft
    tru love is not a scam
    give a truthful reply
    instead of the flim flam
    i swear...if i see another cat actin like a lil by_tch
    ima start blastin like yosimite sam
    double barrel style...keep cuddle'n your narrow style
    without peep'n out the rest...
    we all have room for improvement...because life is just a test
    don't settle for less...give your best
    instead of criticizing catz on da board
    leave your otherworldly nest
    and drop ish that strikes a cord...
    in the name of the Lord
    Amen...

    just a short snipet...from da giant midget
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up !
    make a twist
    da flick of da wrist
    kiss da page
    flow engage
    reach high
    change da tune
    ya skillz have room
    to improve never lose
    in da stanza poetic rule
    like blues clue be true
    and love , just a hit from above

    Tyte drop Khasm
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear ya Khasm. As long as we live, we can learn, if we allow ourselves to. Poetry has so much to offer, there are so many ways we can relate to those who read the pieces, as long as they have a grip on what we as poets are trying to relate. Kudos to you on this brotha.
     
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    :flamet: You know that I know that u know this is on point but I bet they dont even know, Guess they are just 2 slow and cant past go stuck like gary coleman getting older but they still dont grow..... :driveby:

    Tight flow K
     
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    I see you kid
    keep wipin the crust
    off them 3rd _I_ blinds :pool:
     
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    Word up - just do ya thing, give love, write your heart, mind yo own biznass, and the rest will take care of itself.
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm...Khasm...Khasm

    I support you 100% on this...
    It soooo needs to be heard... :hearthis:

    putting this gem...back at the top!


    Keep...keeping us in line!
     
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    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speak ya mind and help them to stay in line! Tyte write :terrific:
     
  9. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    khasm
    nice tite flow....
    keep releasing...showing us what is, what should be, what shouldn't
    really nice
     
  10. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey giant midget...
    I'm saying to myself, *self* ..is this directed to me? ...well let me :thinking: ...just in case it is, ...let's play :pool: ...

    I can lay down some rap, to swell your head,
    make all you rappers..wish you were dead

    I'll have half of yall rolling :wchair: on one peg..
    and the other half hanging :injured: one on the bed

    and since I'm so good, and I take :karate:
    I'll start with ya head...and work on yo body ​

    pssssst...*I think you better be scared*

    :haha: :haha: you got it going on midget man...thanks for the moments of fun​
     
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