Black Poetry : overseas

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by daroc, Jun 5, 2005.

  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    away for overseas
    has me confessin my needs
    wishing for you to listen to me
    initially my desires
    stretched distances from your dreams
    and to you it seems
    now that your gone
    im singing that lonely song
    wishing you here wit me
    even despite what it may look like
    and all the kiddish games i play
    my feelings for you have honestly changed
    since those first days
    i care more about you now then i coulda ever thought
    and now that ur gone im all distraught
    trying to figure out if all the decisions i made were correct
    if everything i said to you was worth the stress
    the time has been going by smooth
    knowing youll be back 2 months after june
    but dam do i miss your voice
    knowing that letter may not reach when needed
    devoting myself to emails
    scribing my day in them
    knowing they only offer limited respnses
    i cant throw everything out my closet
    and im just worried
    that im feelings
    that deisre
    for your love might fade
    with an increase in yours days
    apart from me
    in Iraq
    even more important
    i keep thinking about decisions
    ima make when you get back
    about what level to take this
    if we can make this something we both been craving for
    or if things turn to be
    nuttin more than fantaies while we were both lonely
    as for now i just hope you make it back safely
    after doing you time overseas
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's hard missing a loved one when they are away, and wondering if the feelings will remain once they return. But if the feelings are true, they will still be there. I felt this piece daroc, flow on poet.
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks watz
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely one can feel u yet so far away but in heart closer then ever
    when u miss a love and the daily prayer is a safe return i feel ya !
     
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