Black Poetry : Overlooking The Sea Called Love

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watching the morning sun
    While overlooking this Sea called Love
    I sit
    Scribing
    From the heart
    Feelings
    Emotions
    Passionate dissertations
    Emptying myself
    Of
    Intimacies
    Draining myself
    Of
    Extasy
    Placing them
    In the a bottle
    And tossing it into
    The currents
    Hoping that
    Someone will find it
    And feel what I feel
    And know that my love is true
    Praying that the seed of Passion
    Is deposited in your heart
    Where it may germinate
    And take root
    And lead you to me
    Where we may join
    Together as one
    Watching the morning sun
    Overlooking this Sea called Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BRIGHT SUNNY DAY

    as the sea shore line
    the lighthouse tower
    love is in waves
    she will soon catch the
    clear glass bottle
    and feel the extreme of BISHOP!!

    flow ya true love out brutha ......wow!!:eek: :heart: :D
     
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    A Message in a Bottle

    I like this for its quiet elegance and inner depth-- a real piece of you in this one--thanks for sharing--Ra


    :confused: Is Religion to blame for the WTC tradgedy? Stop past and read a different view of the World Trade Center Crisis--http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?threadid=4105
     
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    quite nyce, dear poet...yes, indeed.
     
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    Yes. Deep as the sea itself.
     
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    the currents of the sea are flowing eazy Bishop.

    nice piece.

    nfinite,
    jh.
     
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    you heard me knocking on the Lighthouse door. I lost ma key..... I saw you tossing that bottle in the Sea.





    One
     
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    feeling all of this Bishop

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Watching the morning sun
    Overlooking this Sea called Love
    I sat upon a rock and
    watched as the bottle fall from above
    falling into the sea
    by passing me
    laying below
    drifting as the current flowed
    as i dove in
    to retreave
    i opened the bottle to read
    that a prince sat up high
    waiting for his angel from the sky
    should i come and see who you are
    should i stay away and let my mind wonder afar
    whichever, it may be
    i pray that someday i will
    become your african queen

    only.......how do i let you know........


    :kiss:
     
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    Wooooooo Bishop......

    This is soooooooooooo romantic....
    to find a bottle with a message of love
    from a man who longs for a Queen to
    touch his heart, now thats definitely
    the makings for a fantasy love story.....

    You've outdone yourself with this here..

    epiphany
    :heart:
     
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