Black Poetry : Overdue Ovation

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  1. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Overdue Ovation

    This is more than poetry
    More the words
    More than the usual you have heard
    You are life
    You are my wife and I say it with no hesitation
    Onitsha get's a Standing Ovation
    She has always been the poetical inspiration
    Let's give the lady of grace spiritual reconciliation

    I want you to think of my love
    Like Tulip Seeds
    You can replant my love at any time
    And watch my buds blossom into beautiful flowers that shine

    Consistently I created negativity
    Not realizing that I had so many barriers to communication
    If I created a sense of distrust and tumultuous emotions
    Only I have the secret to your happiness potion

    You gave me the secret to win
    I decided to yield
    My Love is trying to create a beautiful garden for you
    Not the same old dry fields

    This is more than poetry
    More the words
    More than the usual you have heard
    You are life
    You are my wife and I say it with no hesitation
    Onitsha get's a Standing Ovation
    She has always been the poetical inspiration
    Let's give the lady of grace spiritual reconciliation

    I heard the word love comes from the old English lufu
    Your essence is eternal it was here before time
    This word does not properly say things you do

    I asked you to marry me
    Not to abuse or misuse you
    Not to attack or mislead you

    We all make mistakes
    And commit errors
    But that is no excuse
    To attack your emotions
    And hit you with verbal attacks of Terror

    All I can do from this moment on
    Is recognize your emotions and create an environment free of strife
    Keep praying and remember to speak your love languages for the rest of my life

    This is more than poetry
    More the words
    More than the usual you have heard
    You are life
    You are my wife and I say it with no hesitation
    Onitsha get's a Standing Ovation
    She has always been the poetical inspiration
    Let's give the lady of grace spiritual reconciliation
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man this was power in action
    i love these lines

    This is more than poetry
    More the words
    More than the usual you have heard

    Onitsha get's a standinh Ovation
    she has always been the poetical inspiration
    let's give the lady of grace spiritual reconciliation

    these two was the total package bruh
    awesome scribe more then poetry indeed.
     
  3. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man Up!

    Brother, this is inspirational.
     
  4. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx brothers.
     
  5. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww look at our very own Bro. Manasaic
    You never cease to amaze me, you are such a great man/warrior/king.

    A standing ovation is surely in order for the lovely wife

    :spinstar: ONITSHA :spinstar:

    :bowdown: We salute you sister:bowdown:
     
  6. mz_phi1

    mz_phi1 Member MEMBER

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    I LOVED IT........YOU GET A STANDING OVATION FROM ME, FOR THIS PIECE
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow i like this im really feeling this flow on poet.
     
  8. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful poet!:kiss2:
     
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    kemetkind Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight flow brother!

    Had me thinking of all the queens I've been blessed to know...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Admitting mistakes is not always easy, but when it comes to someone we love, we do it, without excuses. Beautiful piece, your wife adores it, surely.
     
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