Black Poetry : over-ruled

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by manifested, Oct 10, 2002.

  1. manifested

    manifested Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 2, 2002
    Messages:
    25
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    screams in my mind.
    sustained.
    objections to life's questions.
    overruled.
    it seems i'm held en banc--
    to be handed up to a jury of my 'jeers'

    fo
    ll
    y

    of mine own.

    productions scribed from--
    imagination that is only visible through--
    ink and --
    images that
    press themselves against this cathode ray tube--
    floating around cyberspace--
    and eventually sticking to the back of your retina--

    i
    being who i is can't help but to keep committing this crime--
    call me 'espee'
    the repeat offender--
    indict me--
    for scribing in the first degree--
    with seven counts of thinking outside the box--
    one count of not having a statute of limitations--
    and three counts of staying true to myself...
    if no 1 else...

    screams in my mind.
    sustained.
    objections to life's questions.
    overruled.

    stuck where i be--
    ultimately to be who i am--
    ultimately to do what i do

    write.

    sean.learning.evolving.again.

    book seven
    (virTRUES of a painted man)
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    very well written .........wirte on poet!!!
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 22, 2001
    Messages:
    34,797
    Likes Received:
    8,985
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    betwixt and between
    Ratings:
    +9,686
    I do enjoy reading you Manifested ... Thanks for this.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. OmoObatala

    OmoObatala Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Oct 7, 2002
    Messages:
    185
    Likes Received:
    0
    Occupation:
    Admin Assistant
    Location:
    San Francisco
    Ratings:
    +0
    play on playa! Chaullah!
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 26, 2001
    Messages:
    647
    Likes Received:
    1
    Occupation:
    student, advocate to change the world
    Location:
    someplace dreams are made of
    Ratings:
    +1
    rich destee and Exodus.... i thank you three fo the read.
     
  6. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 8, 2002
    Messages:
    289
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    This was FASCINATING and very well done. Enjoyed reading this over and over again.
     
  7. manifested

    manifested Active Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Mar 2, 2002
    Messages:
    25
    Likes Received:
    0
    Ratings:
    +0
    thanks gaylee. i really appreciate the read.

    sean.
     
Loading...