Black Poetry : over my head

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, Aug 5, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your love is like the
    greeting of dawn's
    sun rising against
    the distant haze
    sending chromatic
    waves across the clouds
    in spectral emotives
    drawing me from slumber
    into the wonder of you
    in love above my head
     
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    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOOOOOOOOWEE!!!Extra tight and then some.
    "sun rising against
    the distant haze
    sending crhomatic
    waves across the clouds"

    Nice! The metaphoric tone is all that!
    Keep on keepin' on......

    Peace, Power, and Prosperity
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very smooth flow right here
    tyte
     
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    magnificent. i am loving your poetry.
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes
    from the heart :heart: :wave:
    lovely
    Peace
     
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