Quiet Poetry Lounge : over da edge

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A walk out of dark to light….
    Claws of evil dig away….
    Drownin in hurt…
    as a dog bite deep in the skin
    Never thought…..
    As tears lay the battle is lost
    for the soul dies.....
    cant believe........
    down on knees askin why
    just why...
    dont have a reason
    but i guess the season is passed
    For the feelin is empty and the
    Pain is deadly cant breath
    as the rose fades
    and the black pearl crackes
    Hatred runs from the north
    The stars no longer glo
    As this heart crumbles in pieces
    Damage is the result
    Games of one brought to another
    Threats unwakin and
    the pain shoots through
    Like fire burning paper……
    Meaning of nothing to nothing never was…
    …………..nothing
    seems.................
    A walk out of the dark to light…..
    Held the trust had the faith
    believed believed....
    World light now dim…..
    For it will never happen again…..
    why why why
    ....................why why
    ................................why
    folded in crying.....tears fall
    as a Blackangel flyz away
    away....away.....away....
    cant bare the pain..................
    .....................just cant

    untitle life
    (C) 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WELL FELT SCRIBE
    deep inner mental thoughts run
    we all cross the path in life i've been in this shadow
    express on
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright sis

    Sometimes I wonder why myself....right now I feel like flying away...
     
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    Angel,

    I guess everyone is feeling in this mode. Tight write.....
     
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    wvery time i think u aint going to fly any higher u take me there MBA..whoa!
     
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    Tell me how did you get over the flight??? Tight flow...you are truly a gift...


    But...How do we get past wanting to soar....

    Tia
     
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    We do all have our moments...but they are just that...moments, and they do pass, as do everything in life...even pain.
    very nice piece and know this: What's in...comes out.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and i so love to take you.....thanks for the love... :blush: did i say that...smh
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes in time it fades thanks for the love you always show a sister....Peace
    Angel
     
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    :thanks: for the love.....within is thy faith seek and u shall find my sister
    all is different in takin that flight
    ....Angel
     
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