Black Poetry : Over and Over

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Over and over again
    It has been hard trying to play your game
    Trying to not die inside, but the bitterness
    ……takes over
    It hurts so bad
    Over and over again
    Like a bad dream gone wrong
    My pain starts to cut
    And I can’t see why
    You are holding on
    Why cant you just
    ………… fade
    ……… in the back
    Over and over again
    I cry for the same thing
    You pulling trying to mold me
    Shape me and push me back
    Like 2 steps back
    When I been 5 steps ahead
    Over and over again
    When I want to grow, you try to stop me
    My dreams gone
    My wishes…just wishes
    I will never see my goals
    …………………..with you
    Over and over again
    A replay of pain

    It takes my last breath
    And I cant seem to breathe
    Smothered and lifeless
    As you try to hold me down
    Mold me in to….your mind
    Like I am putty
    Over and over again
    The same sad song
    As I reach and reach
    Trying to shake you
    I am strong you just watch and see
    God made me for a purpose
    Not for you to take my growth and destroy my youth
    Over and over again
    A bad dream gone wrong
    The pain seeps
    As you pretend to….
    Over and over again
    I cry and it is the same broken dream
    Over and over….again

    (c) 2005
    New Vision
     
  2. PurpleMoons

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    Awww Sis! I know that feeling! Over and over again! It won't be long before you spread your wings, and the only over, will be you looking past the pain!

    Loved it sis!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When the pain echoes, that repetition makes it hurt all the more. I felt the ache in this. Flow on.
     
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    emotional scribe sis....
    let the page feel the pain...
    because in there is the release....
    one love
    khasm
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm with Khasm, it's good to release this. What a beautiful job, sis. Flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome flow i feel u deeply sis.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the love and support you all show me :thanks:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and over and over again how i love this piece of art work sis.
    most welcome
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm clapping now queen. Great piece... keep on growing keep on.

    blakverb
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmmm smh...
    may pain become a memory for a path you will never take again my beautiful blak sista
    props :grouphug:
    this was straight from your heart and you could feel it