Quiet Poetry Lounge : ova strong...under stronger....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 2, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ova and under
    I been though dat
    Forest…
    Snaps…..
    Da light shine so
    Bright…
    What a sight…
    Gave me hope…
    When I thought it was none….
    Lay at bay….
    Been there done dat…
    Now I stand proud of the land
    I reach…
    Searhin and learnin…..
    Vibin in my own way…
    Lookin to see…
    Neva stop learnin…
    Upward I climb
    Ta get all I can….
    Ova and under
    Lost in tyme….
    But made it though my prime..
    Now I am grown…
    Strong
    Stronger…
    My soul once cried
    For my heart was torn..
    My mind spinnin….
    But I came though
    All da hard times..
    In da mist I fly
    High and low..
    Came in with da wind…
    Knowin I am a true Angel.
    Wingz been givin so I
    Fly fly fly…
    I fly and stay true…
    Ta me…
    Myself and
    I……
    Lovin my flow as I float
    on my cloud…
    ova and under…
    I been there…
    Wipe my tears…
    Left my fears…
    Saw da light…
    Oh so bright..
    I knows it is all right…
    So I don’t fight it..
    Just make it…
    Fo da light
    Is bright …
    Love da sight….
    Strong
    Stronger….

    :star: :star: :star:
     
  2. SUNkissed

    SUNkissed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (snaps)

    feeling this... I love this flow.. you always write in an easy and expressive way.

    One can tell a tree by the fruit it bears...
    this I KNOW is true
    the fruit you offer.... from what I see
    comes from inside of you.
    MSBLKANGEL
    of
    peace....

    SUNkissed :wave:
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :thanks: Sunkissed..yoour words mean lot
    glad you enjoyed my work...
    blessin to you and yours...
    thank you again for your kind words...:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was beautifully pose'd
    to captures the life of a whole heart
    in a fruitful way of uplifting a soul
    tyte flow :toast:
     
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    :angel1: thank you $$Rich$$
    your comments mean alot to me...
    blesing to you and yours....kisses
    thanks again
     
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    ahhhhhh, I really appreciate this journey. Took a similar one myself, but you represented flawlessly, my sistah. :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome sistah Queen
    the strong hold is within
     
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    aww yes
    wonderful
    this really a very nice flow
    Peace
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

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    thank you Bluewater...glad you like it... :thanks:
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Self-esteem grows from triumph...and so does confidence in one's self. It's a beautiful thing to grow stronger personally...

    :toast:
     
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