Black Poetry : outside lookin' insideout (enough)

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Women are meant to be seen and not heard,
    how absurd . . .
    silent visions that occur in the void
    of paranoid cords being thumbed on keyboards,
    angelic humanoids,
    nothing more than mere toys
    to these fully grown boys . . .
    What a ploy to destroy
    the very essence and fabric of our joy.
    Diminished innocence
    wasted on repeated impotence,
    so false pretense is the only logical inference.
    Limp minds with erectile deficiencies,
    torn down,
    with ruthless efficiency,
    and it’s pissin’ me
    quite the opposite of on,
    cause were passing it right along
    to the babies being born.
    Family structure torn,
    now we feel the repercussions,
    all because we failed to keep the deep discussions.
    Communication lost,
    traded in for so-called “SPACE”
    and the passion was replaced
    by mediocre sexscapades.
    Confusing LOVE with the LUST,
    expecting LOYALTY without the TRUST,
    while neither one of us
    were big enough
    to say . . .
    enough.



    Copyright 2005
    © Ramarla D. Rozier
    Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
  2. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very heavy piece poet. I definitly diggin your style
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ramarla is a poet with so very much to say
    So creative in the way
    We're spanked...

    Say it LOUD Tzevi1278
     
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    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alright everyone this poet is taking us by storm. Definitive piece poet I like your flow.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we don't communicate with each other, and just talk at each other, not much can be accomplished, and so much can be destroyed. I hear what you're saying poet, and I like the way you expressed it. Flow on.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very on point and real i feel u deeply
    we miss the truth without communication
    the lines now open !
     
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    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Communication is the key to love and life..wonderful piece..i enjoyed it
     
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