Black Poetry : Outside In

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Oct 28, 2002.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You told me you loved me
    inside out
    which sounds kinda sweet
    except I have these nagging doubts
    about the way you love me
    if you love me inside out
    you would truly "know" me
    and not be wrapped up
    in some fantasy
    of some replica of me
    that you invented
    for your own pleasure

    you have eyes only for me
    sexually
    and I know you understand me
    physically
    and most times you
    try so hard
    to comprehend me verbally
    but emotionally
    you failed the test
    miserably
    and I need you
    to crawl inside me
    and know every inch of me
    without even touching me

    I need you to know
    all of me
    every part of me
    I want you to explore
    the realities of me
    until you can navigate
    your way around
    every inch of me
    without stopping to ask
    for directions

    In truth
    you love me outside in
    so I want you to start
    all over again
    I want you to really
    love me
    from the inside out
    because that's what
    real love
    is all about

    (c) nfn 2002
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful Flow Kitana

    pd
     
  3. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey!!!
    this is tyght Kitana...word real!

    1luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    one love of no touch
    seek within from inside out
    surely soon one will wake up 2 reality
    and not seek personal pleasures of bliss
    dis here my dear was sho nuff tyght.
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pd...twofish..Rich..

    thank you so much for reading and enjoying, it means a lot to me...

    K
     
  6. elayne.

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    see, now!! there you go again!! writing the words
    that make this sistah wanna throw up her hands &
    testify!! this was on point & just plain marvelous!!

    i liked these lines...
    speak poetess... speak!! :D

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana

    Absolutely extraordinary flow!!! This was alla dat!

    Reas
     
  8. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as always...wonderful.
     
  9. SistaMoon

    SistaMoon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excellent, I'm really feelin it.
     
  10. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if you don't say it, how will he know?!
    likin this flow... -7:spinstar:
     
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