Black Poetry : outside in the rain

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by redlady, Oct 14, 2002.

  1. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    standing on line in the rain with you
    at first i felt the ***** coming outta me
    i don’t “do” standing in the rain
    and then i thought
    but i’m here with you
    and after 18 years you still look “good” to me
    big ole black man standing tall
    in the rain, letting me wear your jacket
    cause in my rush, i forgot
    and you said, here, wear mine ms. forgetful
    and we laughed and we got wet
    and we hopped over puddles
    and we splashed in some too
    standing on line in the rain with you
    love is a beautiful thing
     
  2. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    redlady-I just love this kind of love, it is the BEST. Thank you for sharing this picture story. It is a very moving piece.
     
  3. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for liking it gaylee.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes!!!
    see how love touchies
    da inner soul when ya
    on da line in da rain it's beautiful
     
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