Black Poetry : outer limits

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by herlove, Jun 5, 2003.

  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    outside contray to all that ones mind may conceive born and nutured by that which i believe ...... his love covers me as if leaves of the forest trees and cool is the warmth of his love intertwined of the vines gift given by suttle signs ...... consistent time after time like no other found the closenes if by far within perimeter encircled / round / just us 2 in our circle of love ...... love .....is noticed as profound distant is the call that echos of sounds .......

    to vision, revision, provisions of day in day out decision yet and still i chose ....... to save and not lose ..... for u i walked a mile and ever pair of the shoes ....... that fit the feet of my love and unto me he has been so sweet ........taste of golden bronze honey kissed by the flow of a nectors juice nice and slow solitified just so we'd know .......... us 2 would love each other soooooooooo !!!!!
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    phenomenal and beautiful
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved this flow ............let ya pen continue
     
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    thanks family just trying to catch fleeting moments
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    in fleeting tyme the moment was capture
    ya scribe say it all
    ya style is awesome .........flow poetess
     
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    coming from u rich those words r priceless ...... much love much love for u
     
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