Black Poetry : Outer Galactic lovin

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Aminata, May 10, 2002.

  1. Aminata

    Aminata Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    has got me in a heated
    fervor

    makin me want to maneuver
    make my way over to...

    where you are
    wrapped in your essence
    creating shooting stars

    withing a galaxcy of
    xtra terrestrial beings

    ...You and I...

    making love like supernatural beings
    and...speaking in tongues
    ...words...
    only you and I can
    comprehend

    can you mend my
    aching heart

    can you feel my pounding heart
    beat against your chest

    e s c a L A T I N G

    ---T

    -----U R

    ---B U L
    -------------------------CE
    -------------A N...

    your rocket ejects into my
    space...the abyss

    my lips kiss...
    and you feel the flames

    you call my name
    "Venus!" and...
    you are my Mars...

    upon landing we
    rest
    cradled in moon's crater
    basking in loves rays

    until our next supernatural
    sexual galaxial love journey
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice and Hot!!

    I'm feelin this here!! TooTyte!!:toast:
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good read!
     
  4. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uhhhhhhhmmmmm... Aminata? Where can one find some of that?
    :hot: like fire as usual. This was all'a that and a trip to the spa.
    Rock on girlfriend... rock on.

    Much :heart:
     
  5. ICON

    ICON Active Member MEMBER

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    Girl, Hush yo mouth!!!!
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aw yeah aw yeah!

    :)

    Alyce
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, go on and Scribeaboutit!
    I'm diggin the flow.


    Madd sistahly love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You a bad girl...you know that right?
     
  9. Agentshaft007

    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh how I dig this!!!

    This is sweet!! Like the flow of metaphor. Thats shum hot shtuff!!

    Agent:eek:
     
  10. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOW THAT'S WHAT I AM TALKIN ABOUT!

    And it's sounds simply delicious...think I shall have to book me one of those....
    Enjoyed the read and the flow...didn't know you was gonna get the room all hot and steamy!
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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