Quiet Poetry Lounge : Out There

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Oct 2, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We have the will to take another step
    The desire to continue what began in our souls
    Jumping off a mountain-top
    Clinging to a star
    We’ll forever be in each other’s heart
    No matter where we are

    We’re not finished
    No, we’re just breaking a sweat
    Getting our second wind
    For times to come
    Times gone by
    Times we’ll not regret

    Quietly
    Even secretly
    A love like this
    Moves on its own
    Fueled by truth and honesty
    Hand in hand
    We’ve survived
    We’ve grown

    I don’t think we’re tired
    In fact, we’ve only just begun
    Our clinging hearts move onward
    Our resting place
    Beyond the sun

    BE
    © 2002
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reminds me of the spirit of the song by Ashford and Simpson, "I'm Determined"...

    thank you for sharing

    alyce
     
  3. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is truly the path of two hearts beating as one, heading for the "other side of the sun." So much hope and heart in this piece, and so beautifuly wished apon a star.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loves how u bring it
    sound like two great lovers of da old golden dayz.....
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pulling it together just to say, *******, Poet.

    Bert
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh mighty .......
    oh spirrits .......
    no words .......
    just silence............


    i,m a fan off this piece............

    poet you confronted my soul...
    beautifull libetry laida
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes!:heart: