Black Poetry : OUT OF THE SILENCE

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  1. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    FILLED WITH A LITTLE MORE THAN WORDS
    IM
    STANDING HERE WITH MY HANDS OPEN
    POCKETS TURNED INSIDE OUT
    ALL IN THE NAME OF LOVE
    I STAND HERE MOTIONLESS
    HOPING
    WISHING
    AND WAITING
    HOPING THAT YOU WOULD COME
    IM STANDING HERE TODAY
    FOR FALSE REASONS
    IM NOT STANDING HERE TODAY FOR MY SELF
    GOD KNOWS I SHOULD BE THOUGH
    AS I STAND HERE WAITING ANCHORED TO THIS PLACE WHERE
    I WAS INVITITED
    AS I STAND IN FRONT OF THIS CLOSED DOOR
    WHISPERS OF YOUR NAME ROLL BY
    EVERY TIME THE COLD WINDS HIT MY WARM FACE
    SLAPPING ME IN DISBELIEF
    TRACES OF YOU
    THATS ALL THATS LEFT
    TRACES MERE TRACES
    LEFT WITH OUT A LIFE LINE
    I HESITATE TO BREATHE
    I EXPECTED MORE FROM YOU
    NO
    I EXPECTED MORE FROM ME
    THAN TO ALLOW THIS
    IF YOU CARE SO MUCH
    AND LOVE ME SO MUCH
    THEN WHY AM I STANDING HERE
    ALL BY MY SELF
    ALONE I BE
    OUT OF SILENCE
    I
    CRY OUT
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this...wonderful..
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i feel ya holmes...
    things always work out for the best...
    even when it doesn't feel that way...;)
    tyte joint...next time, hold on to your loot more man...lol
    i've been there
    one love
    khasm
     
  4. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was tyte
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done smooth scribe
     
  6. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the love

    undefinedundefined
    i apperciate the love from everyone thank you a lot
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa, so deep and so lovely. Flow on, brothah.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was wonderfully posed, I felt a sort of peace with this.
     
  9. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the love

    i need it indeed yall inspire me to keep on hold me up
     
  10. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Out of the silence!!!
    Wow I feel that piece.
    Good job.
    Smooches!!! :spinn:
     
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