Black Poetry : Out of the Darkness

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am not sure if some one else titled their poem with the same title. If so I apologize. I just thought it was a good title for this piece.

    Smooches!!!!



    Through the darkness
    I hear you beckon for me
    you call me to come to
    you and to be.

    I try to get to where
    it is that you want me.

    But I can't
    because within the
    darkness is all
    of the strife and
    the confusion of life.

    But I run anyway.
    I run to the sound of
    your voice.
    For it seems that you
    are the only thing that
    can save me.

    In your arms maybe
    I'll find sanity,
    happeness, fulfillment.

    I will never know if I
    don't get through.

    Don't stop calling my
    name I believe that you
    are the only thing
    that can lead me out.

    I'm Listening
    running
    hoping
    searching
    for a way.

    As your love grows for me
    it glows as a beacon brighter
    and brighter.

    I am listening running and
    looking for you
    my way out.

    I hear my name on the
    wind whispered
    it seems to grow
    louder and louder
    as you continue to
    call me.

    Calling for me
    to come to you and
    to be.

    I long to be with
    you safe and

    secure and
    out of the darkness.
     
  2. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    i like this
    well said - heartfelt

    one
    /antar
     
  3. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so
    much.

    Smooches!!!
     
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    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hold on for part three

    i mean im speechless dont really want to respond cant respond
    hiding the way i feel about this to real its to close
    but i welcome you to the light
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed yes !!
    listen close as i call
    this was awesome beautiful
    flow on sistah gurl !!
     
  6. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you $$Rich$$.
    Thanks to you all for encouraging me.
    Smooches!!
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YOU CAME WITH IT!!!!!
    This one I enjoyed
    I felt the conversation of your spirit
    Very tight!!!!!!

    Keep scribin poet.

    PEACE AND LOVE
    twision
     
  8. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is so funny what
    inspires us.
    It may be a word
    or a sound
    or a picture
    a thought a memory.
    I feel so safe
    here I can be me
    and you all
    don't mind.
    SO I
    believe that Iwill evolve here
    and thank you all
    for the nuturing.

    Smooches!!! :grouphug:
     
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